Written October 31, 2005
Drastic dances and lost second chances
One last kiss, a shaking head, a sigh
No lullaby for me
You're walking away, I know you won't turn back
Slipping away, grasping silence
Empty rooms reverberate feelings
My heart mimics your fallen footsteps
I'm at a loss; don't know how to feel
I know there isn't really anything left to say
Now there's only one, me, and I'm not even whole
I got lost and no importance was placed on making me found
Tip and spill, pour out the sun
Pass it around, let this day be done
I never really cared what I came to be
I was just along for the sick and twisted ride
Heartfelt sins and delicious lies
I hate goodbyes, they can't be undone
Brisk needs fall into slow giving hands
Please remind me of the point
The light can't blind, I turned away long ago
I don't think it's possible to begin from the end
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8 comments:
I absolutely loved the first line...made me shiver!
Beautiful poem and it really flows but i do disagree with the line.."I hate goodbyes, they can't be undone"...But thats only from my own personal point of view
Really well put together Megan! :-)
Thank you *bows* I do try. Funny, there used to be a time when I was afraid to show my writing to people.
I agree with the imposter michael
very nice job :)
I like the line he pointed out and
"don't think it's possible to begin from the end"
I like the relation and vividness of a situation ending, and all the emotions that go along with that. Trying to hold onto something thats slowly slipping away ;/
LOL....I like the idea of bein an imposter, Mike...feels dangerous! ;-)
hehe, but the thing is, you don't seem dangerous.
Isnt that a dangerous assumption? ;-)
Perhaps it is...
"ohhhhh so exciting!!"
Quote from "Blade 2" ;-)
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